http://www.willdinski.com/2009/06/page-9/ ¶ Comics, screen prints, handmade books & illustrations. Fri, 23 Jul 2010 17:56:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.willdinski.com/2009/06/page-9/comment-page-1/#comment-479 Will Dinski Wed, 03 Jun 2009 18:07:44 +0000 http://www.willdinski.com/?p=953#comment-479 Great catches. Consider it edited. Great catches. Consider it edited.

]]> http://www.willdinski.com/2009/06/page-9/comment-page-1/#comment-478 Isaac Wed, 03 Jun 2009 17:53:52 +0000 http://www.willdinski.com/?p=953#comment-478 Do you want some more textual editing nitpicks? You need a comma before "Mr. Danielson" in that first speech balloon, because it's direct address. And I think you mean "flushed" and not "flush" in the last speech balloon, right? (Getting flushed means you're red in the face, getting flush means that you don't owe anyone any money, or that you're on a level with the things around you.) Do you want some more textual editing nitpicks? You need a comma before “Mr. Danielson” in that first speech balloon, because it’s direct address. And I think you mean “flushed” and not “flush” in the last speech balloon, right? (Getting flushed means you’re red in the face, getting flush means that you don’t owe anyone any money, or that you’re on a level with the things around you.)

]]>