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Do you want some more textual editing nitpicks? You need a comma before “Mr. Danielson” in that first speech balloon, because it’s direct address. And I think you mean “flushed” and not “flush” in the last speech balloon, right? (Getting flushed means you’re red in the face, getting flush means that you don’t owe anyone any money, or that you’re on a level with the things around you.)
June 3rd, 2009 at 12:53 pm
Do you want some more textual editing nitpicks? You need a comma before “Mr. Danielson” in that first speech balloon, because it’s direct address. And I think you mean “flushed” and not “flush” in the last speech balloon, right? (Getting flushed means you’re red in the face, getting flush means that you don’t owe anyone any money, or that you’re on a level with the things around you.)
June 3rd, 2009 at 1:07 pm
Great catches. Consider it edited.